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INT. Intro

(V.O) Can one man make a difference?  with countries at war, humanity in conflict and the worlds societies amplification of socialism leading to a state of turmoil, yet the masses that populate the earth scurry around in their lives oblivious to their situation....imminent death.the philosopher Socrates once stated "the only true wisdom is in knowing that you know nothing"

INT. torture

we see Dustin tided up in a chair being electrocuted by an unknown man.

dustin

I am going to kill you and i am going to get what i want from you!

INT. woods-day

we see woods with thick underbrush.

Dustin is pointing to something on a map in his hands and Jake are arguing. wile three people in the background are talking and shooting  inquisitive  looks in there direction .

DUSTIN

where off the map!

Jake

where not off the map.

DUSTIN

heres the map,ok, where not on it if thats not lost you tell me what is.

JAKE

...fine well set up camp and get our bearing's well  figure  something out tomorrow.

DUSTIN

you better Jake and don't tell any one we don't know where we are the last thing we need is a panic.


Dustin walks away to inform the others to start setting up camp.

INt. camp-day


everyone is siting down eating sandwiches next to neatly  pitched tents. Dustin finishes his food and gets up

DUSTIN

Ok people lessen up after your finished eating hang the remainder of your food in a tree at lest 100 yards away from camp.




Dustin walks over to where jake is siting, he is looking grim with a few maps in his hand and a compass.

DUSTIN

Any idea where we are?

JAKE

thats what I'm  trying to...

A scream cuts threw the night air behind them. Jake quickly looks to the campers to make sure everyone is accounted for. in panic jake runs though the woods in the direction of the scream.

JAKE

Its Jenna.

DUSTIN

Everyone stay here.

Dustin  takes out his gun and sprints through  the forest after Jake

JAKE

where are you!? Come on make some noise, c'mon lets go, make some noise.

DUSTIN

Jenna where are you!?




  A deafening  sound like metal scraping against metal only twisted almost biological sounding screams out like a siren. camper 1 runs toward them.

camper 1

was that jenna did you find her.

JAKE

(wispers)thats not jenna.



JAKE

GET DOWN!

another metallic scream cuts though  the air.

JAKE

what did we say about staying at the camp!?

CAMPER 1

I just thought i could help.

DUSTIN

where x-marines i think we can handle our selves.

CAMPER 1

so what's that noise some kinda pissed off wolf?

DUSTIN

no,thats no animal.

JAKE

sounds like some kinda machine but it doesn't  make sence i mean there's nothing out here.

CAMPER 1

(yells)

JENNA!

Jake clamps his hand around camper 1's mouth.

JAKE

shut up where obviously not alone out here and who ever is out there chances are they have Jenna.

CAMPER 1

why in the world, why wold any one want to take Jenna.

DUSTIN

why would any one want to build anything out here in the middle of no where, there are no roads leading here nothing, you would have to air lift everything or walk three days if you wanted to get anything or any one here,its because is illegal is  so no one will find them it because they will do anything to keep what ever there doing here a secret and my guess is they wont hesitate to kill to keep it under raps.
©2007-2010 ~gammax13
:icongammax13:

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This is a new story me and some friends are writing for our new movie...check out the trailer and other movies at [link]

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